Sunday, 25 August 2013

Lamentation Twenty Five

A Haiku in Passing


Two cars crash head-on
in the passing place. Too much
courtesy can kill.


Tess Kincaid's prompt this week invites disaster. (Mag 183 is here.)
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14 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 August 2013 at 20:19

    I'll remember that the next time someone suggests I kill them with kindness!

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  2. Tess Kincaid25 August 2013 at 20:22

    Giggling at junkthief's comment...

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  3. Berowne25 August 2013 at 21:11

    Sly and savvy...

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  4. Anonymous26 August 2013 at 02:09

    This is very nicely written. Last line made me smile.

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  5. Wayne Pitchko26 August 2013 at 05:03

    indeed nicely done and thanks for sharing

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  6. Doctor FTSE26 August 2013 at 13:25

    This maintains your usual standard and the central idea is so dismal that I have used it in my own Mag. Thank you.

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  7. Cad26 August 2013 at 14:43

    Delightfully dire!

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  8. jabblog26 August 2013 at 17:06

    Too much courtesy? That'll be the day . . .

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  9. Helen26 August 2013 at 17:45

    Great little haiku .... obviously inspiration as well!!

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  10. gautami tripathy27 August 2013 at 17:05

    True..

    cries inside the mind

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  11. Carrie Van Horn27 August 2013 at 19:08

    Dreadfully written with a flare all your own....:-)

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  13. christian soldier22 September 2013 at 22:18

    I thank Jerry for directing me here!
    Carol-CS

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