Sunday, 29 April 2012

Lamentation Five


Defective Haiku  


Shit! This User Guide
has not one word on "How to
escape from jam-jars."


Prompt thanks to Tess Kincaid at Willow Manor.  Image by Manu Pombrol.
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18 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 April 2012 at 17:31

    Haha! You had me at that title. This is awesome. Thanks for the laugh this morning.

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  2. Maggie29 April 2012 at 18:15

    Haha! Awesome!

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  3. Maggie29 April 2012 at 18:16

    Oh, a gloomy comment. Okay. Damn clever poets. Pffftttt.

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  4. Anonymous29 April 2012 at 18:23

    Ha ha! Made me laugh.

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  5. Gail29 April 2012 at 18:39

    Great, my first smile today!

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  6. Little Nell29 April 2012 at 19:53

    Very funny take on the prompt.

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  7. Tess Kincaid29 April 2012 at 21:29

    Ha! I never read the user guide...

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  8. Brian Miller30 April 2012 at 00:12

    haha...he is in quite the pickle now...lots of fun...and i never read them either so i would be in a heap of trouble...

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  9. Silent Otto 30 April 2012 at 06:13

    What wag planted this defective user guide here

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  10. Unknown30 April 2012 at 07:58

    lol. this is great. Love this. thanks

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  11. Helen30 April 2012 at 20:07

    Look carefully, small print hidden on back page, in a foreign language, with symbols too! I loved your haiku!

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  12. Helena1 May 2012 at 04:45

    Wish all haiku's were made of this kind of thing! Nice to see a fellow Scot on the Mag!

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  13. Helena1 May 2012 at 04:49

    Of course - I meant that in a morbid and foreboding kind of way.........

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    1. The Fifth Horseman2 May 2012 at 07:29

      What other kind of way would you mean, doomed, I say DOOMED, to live in this gloomy, mist-shrouded and soaking wet country? But don't despair. On the other hand . . why not?

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  14. Sean Vessey1 May 2012 at 19:48

    Haiku of cold jars
    Worm the jar to cracking loud
    Sing Vienna boys

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  15. Sean Vessey1 May 2012 at 19:48

    Style

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  16. Susan Lindquist3 May 2012 at 13:48

    ...haha! Like.

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  17. Anonymous5 May 2012 at 22:22

    great pun

    renal test

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I welcome your comments, the gloomier the better. I don't think there's much hope, but that doesn't mean I'm not interested in what you have to say. If you expect me to approve your comment before it appears, you're about to be disappointed. Never have understood why some hypersensitive bloggers need to see what others say before they allow the comment. Poor, sensitive wee souls.

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