Monday, 11 March 2013

Lamentation Twenty

Posted in response to Mag 159, prompted by Tess Kincaid.

Haiku for a Lovesick Sailor


She shot him one glance.
Holed beneath the waterline
He sank without trace.

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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 March 2013 at 18:32

    we had sinking in our poem but for a different reason
    Nice haiku/ shot to the heart...

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  2. Tess Kincaid11 March 2013 at 19:43

    Yikes...

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  3. 21 Wits11 March 2013 at 22:44

    Oh no! Will we see him again!?

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  4. hyperCRYPTICal12 March 2013 at 09:16

    Poor sailor!

    Anna :o]

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  5. Carrie Van Horn13 March 2013 at 18:02

    Love can do that to a sailor....yes.....:-)

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  6. Yvonne Osborne29 March 2013 at 13:25

    I love haiku and yours is pretty fine. I can't be gloomy today, not with the sun shinning brilliantly thorugh my kitchen window and spring in the air.

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  7. Helena30 May 2013 at 18:07

    I sink the poor soul's sailed his last indeed!

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I welcome your comments, the gloomier the better. I don't think there's much hope, but that doesn't mean I'm not interested in what you have to say. If you expect me to approve your comment before it appears, you're about to be disappointed. Never have understood why some hypersensitive bloggers need to see what others say before they allow the comment. Poor, sensitive wee souls.

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