Two-Step Haiku
The Sailor: "Dancing's
the vertical expression
of flat-out intent."
Venus: "In your dreams!
You'll neither dance nor grope me when
you're falling-down drunk."
Tess Kincaid's weekly prompt and many responses to it can be found here.
The picture is: Venus and The Sailor, 1925, by Salvador Dali
The picture is: Venus and The Sailor, 1925, by Salvador Dali
Well, what can I say? A mini play in haiku form. Stand aside Willy, the Asian age has arrived!
ReplyDeleteWe learned as young women exactly where dancing would end ... and they were right of course. But what a way to go?
ReplyDeleteGiggle...fun!
ReplyDeleteMen! Good for Venus. :)
ReplyDeleteClever.
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Moot points, both! :)
ReplyDeleteToo funny...! Except for the falling down part! Ha! Ha! I just adore your header photo!
ReplyDeleteStafford hit the nail on the head - a mini play it is. :)
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