Sunday 15 December 2013

Lamentation Twenty Seven

The Icecutters' Lament: A Hiceku


Thick ice, very cold.
Very thick ice hard to cut
and we're cold. Very.


The picture above, (The Ice Cutters, 1911, Natalia Goncharova) is Tess Kincaid's prompt for Mag 198
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9 comments:

  1. Kathe W.15 December 2013 at 22:34

    a haiku
    so very very cool
    ice is nice

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  2. Tess Kincaid16 December 2013 at 02:26

    I like this. Very.

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  3. 21 Wits16 December 2013 at 16:42

    Very Lovely! VERY much, so!

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  4. Helen16 December 2013 at 18:13

    Hiceku ... oh how clever you are!!!

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  5. Doctor FTSE17 December 2013 at 06:12

    Incorrigible. How can a man so witty be so gloomy?

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  6. Lucy Westenra17 December 2013 at 07:20

    Beautiful mickey-taking out of writers who imagine they know what "Haiku" is. (Wendy Cope is good at it, too. Google her.)

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  7. Anonymous19 December 2013 at 06:24

    A Hiceku.....still grinning. Brilliant.

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  8. Anonymous20 December 2013 at 15:37

    Smiles :)

    Cut ice brick
    do very quick cos chilblains
    are itchy

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  9. Helena25 January 2014 at 22:11

    I recognise a great accompaniment when ice see one. Hope to see you back 'pieing' soon!

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I welcome your comments, the gloomier the better. I don't think there's much hope, but that doesn't mean I'm not interested in what you have to say. If you expect me to approve your comment before it appears, you're about to be disappointed. Never have understood why some hypersensitive bloggers need to see what others say before they allow the comment. Poor, sensitive wee souls.

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