Sunday 25 August 2013

Lamentation Twenty Five

A Haiku in Passing


Two cars crash head-on
in the passing place. Too much
courtesy can kill.


Tess Kincaid's prompt this week invites disaster. (Mag 183 is here.)

14 comments:

  1. I'll remember that the next time someone suggests I kill them with kindness!

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  2. Giggling at junkthief's comment...

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  3. This is very nicely written. Last line made me smile.

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  4. indeed nicely done and thanks for sharing

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  5. This maintains your usual standard and the central idea is so dismal that I have used it in my own Mag. Thank you.

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  6. Too much courtesy? That'll be the day . . .

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  7. Great little haiku .... obviously inspiration as well!!

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  8. Dreadfully written with a flare all your own....:-)

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  10. I thank Jerry for directing me here!
    Carol-CS

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I welcome your comments, the gloomier the better. I don't think there's much hope, but that doesn't mean I'm not interested in what you have to say. If you expect me to approve your comment before it appears, you're about to be disappointed. Never have understood why some hypersensitive bloggers need to see what others say before they allow the comment. Poor, sensitive wee souls.