Sunday, 28 July 2013

Lamentation Twenty Two

Haiku On the Law of 
Unintended Consequences

Man with shotgun thinks
"Don't look gift car in the tyres!"
BANG!  Car falls on head.

Another satisfactory tale of mishap and woe suggested by the Magprompt HERE.


  1. Original thinking and as sad as usual.
    Suggestion. Change "thinks" to "said" which rhymes with "head"

  2. I DO like a happy ending... :)

  3. Piercingly sharp and inventive...

  4. Bwa hahahah! Cleverly and hysterically funny haiku!

  5. Great collection and I sure wish I could write stories for these pictures!Look how lovely these are. I wish I could draw like this. I will miss you, my sweet friend. Looking forward to when you're back.I really appreciate all your comments, thank you! I’m back behind my desk and hope to start blogging again and catching up with all your lovely blogs in the coming days.............

    autograph footballs | autograph memorabilia


I welcome your comments, the gloomier the better. I don't think there's much hope, but that doesn't mean I'm not interested in what you have to say. If you expect me to approve your comment before it appears, you're about to be disappointed. Never have understood why some hypersensitive bloggers need to see what others say before they allow the comment. Poor, sensitive wee souls.